On Saturday, October 06, 2001 2:44 PM I William Wiser firstname.lastname@example.org
>> Not a great work of poetry, but I agree with the sentiment.
> Perhaps you prefer Hiku:
I do prefer _haiku_ and tanga too, but:
> Five Thousand more dead
> All of them children and good.
> The old man is angry
is not a formal haiku. The last line is six syllables!:)
See my "The Many Births of Free Verse" at:
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