Deep Blue Column in TIME
Rick Knight (rknight@platinum.com)
Wed, 25 Jun 97 10:07:13 CST
     Michael,
     
     Interesting essay.  I like the metaphor of prejudice applied to our 
     culture's current sexuality conflict.  Although I can see this getting 
     published as an editorial or at least as an abridged letter to the 
     editor, I'd a) grammar check it and b) remove the consternation you 
     attribute to Gelenter's comments.  However influential he may be, even 
     a remotely vicious comment on his opinions or sensibility weakens your 
     credibility as I read it.  
     
     Using your analogy, as a gay man, when people are pounding or 
     resounding too loudly, I'm always inclined to think "where there's 
     smoke, there's fire."  Look at what's triggering your hostility, deal 
     with it and then re-read your comments.  Much potent and innovative 
     stuff.  I just feel that the harshness against Gelenter distracts the 
     reader's attention away from the possibility and toward an unresolved 
     and unamplified personal conflict.
     
     Just a suggestion.  Enjoyed your thoughts.
     
     
     Rick